What's Frankie trying to say here?
Go to the third graf in his letter. Notice the second "sentence"?
This is a letter from a CABINET member of Doyle's Administration?
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There is not only that faux pas, but also an issue with basic composition: an overabundance of words. Clear writing is a sign of clear thinking. In college, writing a paper like this would be called "B.S.-ing one's way past the teacher."
Wow, I did not expect it to be THAT bad. What a joke.
Granted not everyone is a grammatical pro but that is appalling.
Maria, your remark is dead-on!
When I was a student, the maxim was "make it shorter" (while retaining the necessary ideas and flow).
If you couldn't de-water your first draft by 25%, you were going to get a ZERO....
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